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Journal Entry: Sat May 23, 2009, 11:25 PM
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Hi, you may have seen this in my gallery, but I really think it should be in the next issue of JPG magazine.

Please look, comment and vote for:
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Thanks,

Yori

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Old and Young - the winner

Journal Entry: Sat May 2, 2009, 10:40 AM
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*signmeupscotty holds a photo contest every month.
I won the last one, and decided to feature the winner of this one in my journal.

The contest theme was:
Old and Young

Please meet the winner: *senicar
With this shot:

I wish to discuss this image - why it is a winner and what could be improved. Some issues are technical, and could easily be applied to other images.

First and foremost comes the subject - kids are always good subjects because of their inherent "cuteness", but here, true to the contest theme, there is also an adult. The interaction between them and the eye contact are very important to the success of the image - they establish the theme as the interaction between them "Father and Child" rather then two portraits. The complete scene is enhanced by the look on the father's face - giving it a comic side.

So far - I covered the basic subject matter, now lets have a look at composition: Apart from the two of them there is very little else to distract the observer, and a few elements that add to the composition.
The frame of a 35mm meg comes close to the "Golden Section" (about 1.618:1). When you take away a square out of a golden rectangle, you get another rectangle with the same proportions - this has been used extensively in art and design. Here you can see the square as the brick wall framing the father, while the door (the other golden rectangle) frames the child. This compositions is, therefore, harmonious and very pleasing to watch. While the two subjects are each individually framed, the eye contact connects them, and the intercom box between them makes an isosceles triangle that helps balance the composition without distracting (remove it and the top part above the father's head may seem empty. The final compositional element that makes this image feel so right is the location of the child - for some reason, when our eye wonders around an image, the natural resting place is the bottom part of the left side. In this image, the child is the main subject, with the father being secondary (but also important) - again, adding to the perfect composition.

Overall the subject matter is great, portraying child and parent in a humorous way and perfect composition.

Is the image perfect? No, there are minor points that could be improved:
Perspective - In an image where the door is so close to the left end of the frame it would have been much better to have the wall perfectly parallel. To achieve that the camera must be perfectly parallel to the wall and not tilted up (as here) or down. The other option is correcting in PS - acceptable without making it a manipulation. The other aspect is very hard to judge on a screen, as calibration may be the source, but to me it seems to lack some contrast - changing the curve (PS curves) to make it shallower at the top and bottom (keeping highlight and shadow detail) and making it steeper at the midsection (enhancing mid-range contrast) could improve. No screen or scan could ever match a good silver print - and unfortunately disappearing breed.

I think I have rambled enough about this superb winner - I just want to leave you with a few more images from *senicar's excellent gallery:


"Just an old phone", but the image would be nowhere as good without the careful lighting bringing out detail, and the well chosen background and base enhancing the nostalgic warmth of the phone.


This one was selected to show that you don't need to be close. not even show the face, to make a portrait that speaks about a person.


I felt like that at some stage, now I don't visit as much as I used to. Great concept, perfect blending with the dA page. I think the lighting could have been better, but who really cares?

That was a real photographer that won that contest!

Hope you enjoy his work!

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New beginnings

Journal Entry: Fri Apr 3, 2009, 2:39 AM
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Hi all!

I haven't had much time recently, but in between life, I managed to enter

in *signmeupscotty's New Beginnings contest.

As things turned out - I won!
:w00t:

I wanted to thank everyone who voted for me, and subsequently commented and/or :fav:ed it, and my other photos.

Topaz will be five in May.
Her new sister is due by planned C-section this Sunday, so I'll be around even less, but may have a new photo to enter somewhere... :)

Hope you're all well - don't forget to comment on your favorite images, and not just fav and run!

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Eden - well worth visiting! Help?!

Journal Entry: Wed Dec 10, 2008, 2:23 AM
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I work for the R&D of a company that makes baling nets, such as in Survivor

Our graphics department is seeking photos of bales made with earlier nets, that show a clear view of the bale (for publications and advertising). If you have any, and agree that we use it, please send me a link.
Thanks!!!

I rarely feature a DD, as it has already received enough exposure, and judging by the soon to reach 35,000 views, you have probably seen this one; however, I wanted to use it to explain some issues that are interesting about visual processing in our minds, and why this composition is so perfect, because good composition is independent from subject matter!

Have a look at:

(I recommend opening another window or tab)

When we look at an image, we screen it, and our mind anchors on points of interest, but for some obscure reason, there is a "comfort zone" near the intersection of the thirds at the bottom left. when a point of interest lies there, the image "feels" solid and balanced.
In this image, this point is occupied by the base of the tree's trunk - a solid object in itself. Then there is the left major branch, dark and solid, curving left and then back towards the top center of the frame, framing the image and keeping our gaze from wondering away. The other major branch is lighter, and as it goes up directly through the center of the image serves as a frame within a frame directing us to "the main event" - the little pond at the back - and island of green surrounded by the exquisite red foliage. This forms and ellipse - another very stable form - at the bottom third at the center of the image. On the other side of that ellipse there is a green bush, making the image asymmetrical, yet balanced. Because it is asymmetrical it is dynamic (the diagonal branches add to that too), adding interest to the composition! Three minor branches slanting to the right from the top complete the "frame", directing us back to the ellipse stopping us from wondering to the top right. Further right, the bottom part is occupied by more green bushes, but as these are very homogeneous, they do not attract attention, and complete the framing on this side. To the left of the main trunk, the is another green bush, which miraculously has a branch that is almost a perfect radius to the curve of the main left branch, adding to the balance and comfort of the composition and keeping us from straying left if we managed to look past the trunk! Finally, the leaf covered moss at the bottom frames the bottom of the frame, avoiding a sharp division into red top / green bottom, and again balancing and leading us towards the central ellipse.

Overall this image lets us wonder through it, inviting exploration of all corners while always leading us back to the center - a masterpiece of composition, worthy of an honored place in any composition class - and any wall!

Now, you may think that the magnificent colors (and they are truly magnificent!) are what makes this image work, but I say no! Don't take my word for it, though - see for yourself: =failingjune, the author of this DD-worthy image, has taken another one of the same tree, at the same time, presented as Eden II - but here the composition makes us rest on the trunk, symmetrical, and while we enjoy the colors, we loose the dynamic wondering through the image that this composition offers!

PS I also think it works well with the colors of my CSS =D

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'glitterdarkstar forever

Journal Entry: Wed Nov 19, 2008, 1:40 PM
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I support *glitterdarkstar!!!

Please read:
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dibbi's

Form your own opinion.
I think there are times when being right is not what one should be.
I think the are times when one should be wise
I think Lore should be a senior again.
I think this will be better for dA.
Just my opinion.
What is yours?

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